Prevention is better than cure".Out of country's health budget,a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on preventive measures. To what extend do you agree?

Health related problems have always been a centre of focus for all the societies.I believe the old

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saying is certainly

true; "prevention is better than cure ".It is strongly recommended that

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should be mainly invested in preventive measures rather than

treatment

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and investigations of the diseases.

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of all,

treatment

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and investigation of a

disease

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is

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are

undoubtedly an expensive process.Medicines are very costly and the tests advised by the doctor are even more.Not only

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hospital admission fee

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the hospital admission fee

consumes a huge amount of

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.

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if all

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money

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is spent on those measures that can help prevent the illness, the result would be far better.And

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, these measures do not require a handsome amount of

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.Take diabetes as an example

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the ways in which people can protect themselves against it are quite simple and cheap.Doing regular

excercise

the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit

exercise

and consuming a low-calorie diet is a solution to prevent it.

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, it is evident that spending

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on preventing measures is enormously beneficial when compared to spending on

treatment

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of a

disease

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.

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,

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spent on

treatment

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is sometimes virtually wasted as many diseases do not even respond to medications.Looking in detail, there are many serious complications that arise

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of a particular

disease

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that cannot be sometimes cured even with costly medicines.Lung Cancer illustrates an excellent example of

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cases.People suffering from

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cancer have to undergo

various dangerous procedure

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the various dangerous procedure

various dangerous procedures

and need extremely expensive medicines.But, despite

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recovery rate is very low.

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if all

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money

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is spent on preventive steps

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as, raising awareness about

harmful effects

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the harmful effects

of smoking

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people would avoid smoking. To conclude, the best way to fight any

disease

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is by investing in its prevention.Once some acquires an illness

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it becomes difficult to treat it and afford all the expenses.