A restaurant near your home is making a lot of noise. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter Describe the problems you are facing How it solve this problem and suggest solution What will you do if it cannot solve this problem

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter regarding the noise problem from your restaurant. I have lived near Yonge and Bloor street for over

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years and I

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satisfied with my neighbourhood, but the current environment is pretty stressful and distracted by that. Recently, My husband and I are having a rough time every single day around 6PM to late

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. That time is

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important moment for us, after working hard, we would love to have a peaceful dinner, read a book, or take a rest.

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our time got disturbed by noise pollution.

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causes reducing our immune system due to lack of sleep at night. I would suggest

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the fence

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higher or your customers be informed

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issue to cooperate. I am wondering how you improve

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condition to change

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situation. If it will not adjust, I might need to report to

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council. I look forward to receiving your reply by return. Yours faithfully, Noa Park

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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6 paragraphs

168 words

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