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In recent years, foreign travel has been increasing rapidly.
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, the majority of these journeys to a distant land are made by international students seeking foreign tertiary education abroad and various reasons are raised as to why it has become a norm, the essay will look at the possible causes and
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 why I will consider
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 venture myself.
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 with, one of the reasons why people prefer
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 path is to secure superior education. As different countries vary in level of development they differ in the quality of learning obtainable.
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, the
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 world states offer far more in the standard of learning and are hosts to the highly ranked universities in the world much more than the
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 world countries.
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, individuals from these regions of less development are eager to spend resources in other to secure better learning.
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, it is estimated that over 5 million foreign scholars seek admission in UK universities annually and 60 percent of these are from developing nations. Another reason why the majority of people tend to pursue the trend is to secure employment. It is a well-known practice that the easiest way to get a job in a country is to study there.
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, persons that want to be expatriates in a different geographical entity feel that the most appropriate means to achieve
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 to get a degree in that land.
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, Canada continues to see a spike in the number of permanent resident applicants through their Canadian experience class, which consists host of graduate international students that do not want to go back. In conclusion, getting a degree outside my nation will be an interesting fit that I would want to embark on because I will be exposed to a higher standard of learning which will not only qualify me to reside and work in a different region if I so wish but will, in turn, enlighten me to various cultures and traditions outside the one am used to.
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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