Some people are of the opinion that there should be a car-free day once every month, on which no private vehicles are allowed on the road. Discuss the advantages and possible disadvantages.

The topic of banning the movement of personal automobiles on a specific
day
in every 30 days has always been debatable.
This
essay will shed some light on
advantages
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the advantages
as well as disadvantages of not using private vehicles on
dedicated
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a dedicated day
day
monthly. To initiate with, the important benefit of car free
day
will be
time
for repair and maintenance of roadways. Because of
huge number
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the huge number
of personal vehicles on roads, traffic jams are very
common and
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common, and
this
results into
improper fix
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an improper fix
up of
infrastructure
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the infrastructure
. On
off
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off days
an off day
day
,
municipality
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municipal
workers can do restoration work without much interruption and can reduce the number of accidents due to water clogging and
pot holes
a pit or hole produced by wear or weathering (especially in a road surface)
potholes
can be lowered.
Moreover
, other benefits could be we can save numerous ounces of our natural resources like petrol and diesel.
On the contrary
side, some possible drawbacks of
same
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the same
could be
surge
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surging
in the demand of public transport. As every individual will use the common bus or trains for travelling.
This
could lead to overcrowding and stampede.
Therefore special
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Therefore, special
arrangements should be planned to avoid fatalities.
In addition
to, communal transportation could be
time
consuming because one needs to follow the scheduled route and
time table
a schedule listing events and the times at which they will take place
timetable
. In Big cities like Mumbai and Delhi, travel would be very difficult and tiring. To conclude all bits, merits of disallowing automobiles like on
time
overhauling of
infrastructure
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the infrastructure
, saving
environment
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the environment
as we could control a lit bit of pollution
also
.
However
, to overcome all the demerits proper management and planning is must like increasing the frequency of public transport and introducing buses on shorter routes as well.
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