Many offenders commit more crime after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening and what measures can be taken to tackle this?
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after the certain period of punishments because of taking revenge or some social issues. I will give detail explanation Use synonyms
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, the surrounding of prison impact on the offender's mind to commit a Linking Words
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as criminals are isolated with other offenders who, made a bad impact on their mind. Linking Words
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, Once criminals got released after a certain amount of time no one wants to hire them for a job because of criminal records.Linking Words
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, they decide to choose illegal ways. Linking Words
For instance
, a report published by "The Guardian" police shows that about 40% criminals Linking Words
re-offend
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because of less job opportunities.
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On the other hand
, the authorities should run some rehabilitation programs in prison to give right direction to offenders.Linking Words
Moreover
, gives some knowledge of latest technology and develop some skills which can be helpful to them, Linking Words
Thus
they can easily get a good job and makes their life as a respectful individual of society.Linking Words
For example
, A report published by "Tihad Jail" in India, Which shows About 35% criminals got hired on valuable position in the company because of skills training which, was provided in prison.
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, giving right direction and Generate some skills which are in demand nowadays may reduce the ration of Linking Words
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