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Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In the recent era, the modes of enjoyment for the masses is changing rapidly. The human beings celebrate almost all the functions together without any discrimination in the kind of festival. I firmly stand by the given viewpoint. In my piece of writing
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 I shall shed light on
reasons
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the reasons
 of my an agreement. More importantly, in the current time period, the people
only wants
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only want
are only wanting
 to enjoy the various moments of the life, and perhaps, they only want to celebrate and cheer up their happiness.
For example
, on Christmas day, all the mankind across the world likes to fill their 25 December night with fun and dance. The humans do not pay attention
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to
 the spiritual values and explore about the sacrifice
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 which is done by Jesus Christ. So, the masses decorate the cake of the religious festivals with enjoyment sauce only.
Furthermore
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 many and various traditional festivals exist in the every society. The old moments and culture is
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passed
 through one generation to another with the help of seasonal
occassions
something you have to do
occasions
occasion
, but, with the passage of time, the humans reflect the shadow of modernisation from the mirror of the old functions.
For instance
, in India, the ways of
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the thing arranged or agreed to
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 in the harvest fairs upgraded by new techniques
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 which shift the mind compass of the people
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to
 dance on high beat only. I think
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 the ways of celebration are greatly
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impacting
 the modern man and it provide dim light
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of
 the historical and religious events.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Commercialization
  • Globalization
  • Cultural dilution
  • Traditional values
  • Secularization
  • Festivity
  • Heritage
  • Individualism vs. collectivism
  • Consumer culture
  • Intangible cultural heritage
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