Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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One of the most controversial issues today relates to media focus on problems.Regarding

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theme, various individuals hold different viewpoint.

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, I believe that

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should be examined from both points of view. In the

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place, on one aspect of the debate there are people who argue that the benefits of media focus on problems considerably outweigh its drawbacks

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The main reason for

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is that when watch

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news we will be on the alert that we won’t repeat

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it very well for our country,

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now in our country there is strict quarantine and in news like KUN.As they give fresh news about CARONAVIRUS every hour and it suits us.It is

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possible to say that I want to say bad news makes us careful and we protect ourselves than in those days and makes our country's elite Notwithstanding, it is

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possible to make the opposite case. It is often argued that in fact reduces moods and lowers a person’s spirit for a while and when

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watch bad news

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feel purulent. As shown above, there is no easy answer to

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question. On balance,

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, I tend to believe that I disagree because

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news makes us countries and significantly confident in the streets

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

211 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

pessimistic outlook
exposed to negative news
stress and anxiety
success stories
balanced reporting
well-informed public
rational decisions
sense of helplessness
apathy
skew public perception
mistrust in institutions
enhance well-being
mental health
manipulate public opinion
serve specific agendas

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Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

Directors of large organizations receive much higher salaries than ordinary workers. Some think it is necessary while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. Do you agree or disagree? Write an essay (of about 300 words) to state your own opinion.

Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation?

Do you think that ageing society will disapear? what are the advantages and disadvantages of having more old people in society?