A lot of money is spent on repairing old buildings. Instead of repairing old buildings that money should be spent on knocking down old buildings and building new ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the highly modernized world of today, change had become an inevitable part of life. It is argued that the same hold true for the architecture built around us. Some people opine that rather than repairing traditional buildings, it is better to spend money on demolishing old buildings and constructing new ones. I partially agree with the statement on account of the reasons elucidated below.

To begin

with, renovating traditional infrastructure help preserve the cultural ethnicities of a region. They help

young generation

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the young generation

gain an insight into the cultural diversity, works of arts and craft of their glorious past while providing them with a means to relish and enjoy a

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first hand

experience. These sites

also

attract tourists from around the world which in turn help

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the government

in generating

revenue which

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revenue, which

is ultimately utilized in ameliorating the lives of the citizens. With these sites, being destroyed, foreign visitors will have no reason to visit a place.

Moreover

, older people had spent their entire lifetime in the older construction and

hence

do not want to demolish the same given their attachment with the same.

However

, those who argue in

favor

promote over another

favour

of the new construction content that given the recent developments in technology, the traditional buildings no longer cater to the needs of

existing generation

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the existing generation

.

For instance

, earlier, there used to be no reading room for the family member where they can sit in peace and enjoy their

reading but

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reading, but

now most of the houses have a room earmarked solely for

this

purpose.

Also

, there was no provision for a bar in the

house but

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house, but

now a days,

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the majority

of the residential areas have

this

facility. In conclusion, while new buildings are essential to cater to the needs of

younger generation but

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the younger generation, but

the younger generation but

a younger generation but

younger generations but

at the same time protection of traditional buildings is the need of the hour so that our rich heritage is protected and preserved. The

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“old is gold” holds relevance even today since knowledge of one’s tradition keeps a nation’s youth on the right track.