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what are the changes at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005?

The
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 illustrates planes place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.
This
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 is the same place with an interval in time of 15 years. On top of the
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 is shown 1990 where there is one five-story building, the city school, railway station and 16 private houses,
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 2 bridges over the river and 3 roads. At the bottom of the
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, 2005 shows already 6 five-story houses, 3 bridges across the river, a supermarket, factory. Private houses decreased by 4. Trees abate by 16
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But the lake remained
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 large and the number of roads doubled.
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, riverbed has not decreased over 15 years due to the nearest plant.
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, the view of the body of water (presumably the sea) in 2055 was closed by five-story houses. And the beach on the shore became impossible due to the railway. So, for 15 years place on the
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 has changed a lot.

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