In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their leaves of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Obesity and
health
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big issue
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a big issue
big issues
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Numerous nationals are facing trouble with increasing size in the body which lead them more
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diseases
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I believe that eating unnecessarily foods which human cannot digest and not serious toward the body is main causes which can be overcome by applying a least efforts
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This
world has more competition so professional has less time to take care
health
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They eat junk
foods many
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foods, many
times which
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times, which
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the future
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Other side masses are not doing exercise on daily which have been effected them badly
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For example
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old
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older
ager had done proper
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yoga, which
resulted them of symptom free life
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how kids can sustain the responsibilities
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if their immune system is not capable.
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society
an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
Society
has made interest in dehydrated
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diet, which
lead them more
health
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This
problem can be solved. If
government
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the government
implements some efforts.
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state
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the state
shoud
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
facilitate the awards to those who win latest campaigns about
health
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Secondly
, manufacturers who are selling contaminated food or following the worst process while making products at plants must be penalised.
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Canada's admin banned the 20 units in its region since they were adhered the wrong practice for the mankind
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Thus
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merely individual can not detract an spreading issue which could be pushed by putting concerted efforts
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In conclusion, undoubtedly every day more men and women
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are admitted
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to
the
hostpitals but
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hospital, but
hospital but
this
major problem can be avoided by amalgamation inputs
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • obesity
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • calorie consumption
  • food desert
  • health disparity
  • nutritional education
  • genetic predisposition
  • metabolism
  • processed foods
  • public health policy
  • infrastructure
  • health promotion
  • awareness campaigns
  • dietary habits
  • lifestyle diseases
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