Advances in technology and automation have reduced the need for manual labor. Therefore, working hours should be reduced. To what extend do you agree?

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Many companies and businesses think extending trading hours will benefit them in the long term. But is
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technological advancements
  • automation
  • efficiency
  • productivity
  • manual tasks
  • obsolete
  • labor surplus
  • work-life balance
  • mental health
  • well-being
  • economic challenges
  • reduced income
  • economic downturns
  • technological unemployment
  • re-skilling
  • displaced workers
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