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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

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Of those issues that have sparked public interest, the topics as regards renewable energies are of the most prominent ones. One school of thought contends that some type of energies
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 non-replaceable
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however I
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however, I
 personally believe that contemporary world needs
new kind
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a new kind
new kinds
 of energies to stand in any circumstances. Let us examine both views before reaching a concrete decision. It may be tempting to argue that non-renewable
energy
 plays a significant role in
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providing
 human
energy
 needs. The underlying reason is that types of energies including petrol
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 gasoline and coal
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a more reliable source
 and can be used in any situation.
On the other hand
, solar
energy
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to
 geographical location and countries with less sunny days that receive
small amount
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a small amount
 of sunlight are infelicitous for
this
 kind of
energy
. Western and north EU countries are a relevant case in point.
Furthermore
,
solor
relating to or derived from the sun or utilizing the energies of the sun
solar
energy
 needs expensive devices to be installed in every house roof that cause not every family can afford to pay for it. Compelling arguments can be proposed that solar
energy
 has its merits and demerits, but the pros outweigh its cons. An advantage of solar
energy
 is that it can be used without building expensive power plants.
This
 cost saving help underdeveloped and developing countries around the world to devout their budget on more competing issues
such
 as public health care system
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children's
 education or elderly care. Granted that
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 solar
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safer
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compared
comparison
 to other sources. Governments allocate a wide range of budget in
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(often plural) a command given by a superior (e.g., a military or law enforcement officer) that must be obeyed
order
 to clean pollution caused by nuclear
energy
, fossil fuels or pay subsidies to environmental activists. Having considered both landscapes of thinking. I would concede that solar
energy
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 sway over future world that esteem from being clean and safe. Should developing the solar panels become more affordable, its popularity will escalate.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Renewable energy
  • Subsidies
  • Tax credits
  • Photovoltaic cells
  • Efficiency
  • Off-grid
  • Carbon footprint
  • Climate change
  • Initial investment
  • Energy security
  • Sustainability
  • Decarbonization
  • Grid parity
  • Feed-in tariff
  • Energy storage systems
  • Payback period
  • Net metering
  • Silicon panels
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