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Some people believe charity organization should only offer help to people of their own countries. Other claim that these organizations should give aid to people in great need wherever they live. Discuss both opinions and tell which side do you agree?

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Some people hold the view that
Non-profit entity
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a nonprofit entity
a Non-profit entity
a non-profit entity
 should help an individual, irrespective of the geographic locations, while
other
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others
 believe that the firm should save people in their own nation. In my opinion, I believe with the former view. The Non-profit firms are established with the sole purpose of helping the people in distress, and ethically they should provide an assistance to the individuals, irrespective of a nation.
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 is because
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 firms receive donations from renowned person, leaders and global firms, around the world.
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, they should not discriminate while helping the people.
For Instance
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, 35% of the donation received by Being Human Trust, established in the UK, comes from an
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 in The United States.
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, the developing countries are in need of assistance because of poverty and natural calamities as compared to the developed countries, and it would be inhuman if
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 organisations from developing countries would not come forward to help.
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, some people argue that a Non-profit
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 should only help people in the
country
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 where they are established. The main reason is the benefits received by the
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 from the government of the
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. The government does not levy any tax on the donations received by the
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 organisations, because of the motive to assist the people in trouble and not to earn profit.
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, the
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 organisations main focus should be on helping the citizens of the
country
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. To illustrate, the government, in India, has passed the resolution that there will be no tax on all the transactions done by a non-profit firm in the
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. In conclusion, I believe that the primary focus of the
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organisation
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 should be to help people in the
country
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;
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, it should not divert from its motive of helping people and should provide assistance to the people around the world.
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