Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree. What other measures do you think might be effective

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It has been suggested that many

traffic

jams and

car

accidents happens because, of the

prise

the property of having material worth (often indicated by the amount of money something would bring if sold)

price

perils

of petrol is very cheap. While, to do prise

expensivly

high in price or charging high prices

expensive

expensively

to solve these

problems

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problems, however

however

, many people want to buy and

drive

different cars as,

this

is a dream of all men and women in the current time. To my mind, many people buy some cars at least 2 or 3 different

one

Accept space

and they want to be

reachest

Suggestion

the richest

richest

richer

reached

racist

person among their co-workers and relatives, but, they

can not

cannot

understand that they do not let others to

drive

free,

as a result

, they

are contribute

Suggestion

are contributing

have contributed

are to contribute

different

traffic

jams and other

one

. I think not only to buy many cars contribute various

car

accident

Suggestion

accidents

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furthermore

, many people have bad driving habits, they have

drived

compelled forcibly by an outside agency

driven

derived

thrived

reclessly

in a reckless manner

recklessly

and of course speed.

Furthermore

, many people permitted to

thier

of them or themselves

their

tear

adults to

drive

car

Suggestion

a car

the car

without driving license or they do not want

give

Suggestion

to give

them

different driving course

Suggestion

a different driving course

because of, they do not want to spend their money.

Furthermore

, they teach to

drive

themselves

instead

of, give them to

learen

gain knowledge or skills

learn

Loren

driving

Suggestion

to drive

from different professional

car

drivers.

As a result

, every day we can see many

car

accidents. I think government should pay attention. To my mind, every family should buy

one

car

not many or every member of

one

In addition

government

Suggestion

the government

should build many bridges as much as possible as, some cars can not

weit

Suggestion

we it

in the

traffic

jam when during the driving suddenly start

traffic

jam it can be harm for

ambulance

Suggestion

an ambulance

the ambulance

this

kind of cars as, in these cars can be

diffirent

unlike in nature or quality or form or degree

different

ill people or ding

one

. To conclude, the government should do petrol

Accept space

not expensive

Accept space

but they need to do

them

of them or themselves

their

energetic or with

battary

group of guns or missile launchers operated together at one place

battery

and at present they

can to solve

Suggestion

can solve

all problems which related to the

car

accident,

traffic

jam or air pollution.

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