In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that government should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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in many countries is getting close and closer

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means in will not be responsible for person's remuneration.

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the headquarters

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want to scrutinize whether

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the government

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for people's earning or existing a few but really affluent is significant for others.

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restricting money to some people will have uncertain and

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future for others

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the amount

of salary can provide indiscriminate life for everyone. Several people who have

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numerous amounts

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of money

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in a

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) can determine and change

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prices

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he/she could increased

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the price

of book

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newspaper and

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some things

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salary

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the salary amount

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of people is restricted by

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no one will not be able to change things fee except jurisdiction in

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the government

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consequently everyone

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every person in that

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is going to encounter with unpredictable future owing to people who have the most power

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to want

to change

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price

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prices

of things but with different restriction from

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these changes is not going to happen.

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Whenever

some specific persons have the maximum

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of money

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no one can improve different aspects of him/herself.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that government should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives.

according to some recent research rates for committing crime after a criminal's release are concerning at such high numbers, although unspecified.

Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good while others think there disadvantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.