If you could make two changes in the educational system of your country, what aspects would you change? Support your ideas with reasons and examples and discuss how the changes you suggest would improve the system.
It is undeniable that in
this
modern-day, educational Linking Words
system
across our country has many aspects Use synonyms
that is
being advantageous. Linking Words
Nevertheless
, there are some problems about the methods of its Linking Words
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that have to be considered. In the following paragraphs, the way of alterations will be reached with the benefits in the consequence.
Take a premier observation at the institutional systems in Thailand, there are an obvious lack in its Use synonyms
system
which is one of the main factors in our life now, high-technology. In simple terms, many teachers are not well prepared for the new systems Use synonyms
such
as the application that we can use it for an educational purpose. Linking Words
For example
, the professor could make a schedule about the examination for the students through its application. Linking Words
Therefore
, it can be led to the change of the Linking Words
system
, we must reassure that all professors in the school are ready for the new way of teaching by giving a lesson for all of them.
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Moreover
, nowadays, the Linking Words
test
for the teenagers in Thailand does not include the oral Use synonyms
test
which is literally important for their real life in the future. Use synonyms
For example
, oral Linking Words
test
can be an essential improvement of how the students think and say it with their confidence. Use synonyms
Thus
, we should provide the speaking Linking Words
test
part to allow our students to show their genuine performances of them. Use synonyms
Therefore
, the students can understand that only academical skill does not affect to everything in their own life, but the intelligent skill does.
In conclusion, it can be seen that both of these alterations can make a powerful effect on the educational systems in many perspectives for our country. Linking Words
Therefore
, we should stand together and show our institutions how wonderful they are. So, the educational systems are going to be better shortly.Linking Words
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