Some people that children should start school as early as possible,while others believe that they should start school at the age of seven .Discuss both the view and give your opinion.

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There are split opinion regarding the joining of the institute. A few individuals believe that infants must start their academic work from the early
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, whereas other support that toddlers should join academic work at the youth of
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both the opponents have their own prospect.
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, before commenting on my outlook
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both the sides are discussed
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. Discussing the former prospect, the principal arguments the supporters put forward is, in the modern era the afflict of discipline is more as compared to previous, so starting academic at an early
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will be beneficial to explore more technology at the teenager
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, they can train their minds as at an early
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the development of brain play vital role in the development of
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child
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the child
children
a child
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, getting school as well social skill will turn the offspring into responsible citizenship
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which will reduce the crime rate as well as beneficial to society in the latter stage of life.
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of education will help them to complete their degrees and master at the young
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will help them to be a successful individual in the later stage.
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side, the latter view suggests that
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must be joining the school at the
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of 7 because after the
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of six,
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child's mind
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a child's mind
the child's mind
is developed to handle the burden and stress of the school work.
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is to say that, failure of handling pressure before the
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of
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will affect the psychology of
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and
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is leave a negative mark on
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the child
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a child
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will be grown up with the lack of confidence. Apart from
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it is to be said that an infant have all rights to enjoy it's childhood without any burden of education before the
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of
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. It has been observed that many countries and schools have rules that education of
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child
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children
the child
will start after the
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of
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is the crucial period of life and after
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an individual will not have time to relish the life. To conclude and give my opinion, I would say that the latter view is more realistic than the former view.
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