More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which can not be treated with modern medicines. Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree?

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In recent decades, more and more people choose to lead a sedentary
lifestyle
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. While some people believe that a modern
lifestyle
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is a responsible for fitness issues which can not
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be cured
by modern remedies, other claim that conventional drug should be reused. In my opinion, I completely disagree with
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view. I hold the view that developed medicine should be made a priority when it comes to health care. On the one hand, there are some disadvantages of modern
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should be taken into consideration.
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, modern humans are facing high distraction from different means of entertainment, in either visual or audio
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as TV shows or social networks. Since these forms of entertainment could be enjoyed without body strenuous movement, many people susceptible to committing most of their time
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recreational activities.
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, these days people rely on fast-food or pre-prepared meals, which contain too much fat, salt and sugar. These foods are really attractive to people because they are quite cheap to buy and easy to prepare.
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, an unhealthy diet can cause various health problems.
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, obesity, diabetes, cancer and heart attack disease are on the rise.
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, the latest medicines save millions of people every year. It is undoubtedly true that inventing vaccines and antibiotics enable people to prevent the fatal endemic diseases as well as bacterial infections.
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, they are effective in treating wounds and ulcers.
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, if vaccines are not discovered, people will properly be succumbed by bird flu, rubella, etc. Another essential thing, the current medication strongly supports doctors in saving the patients’ lives,
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as open-heart surgery, organ transplantation etc. To sum up, I believe that the current
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has some adverse effects, and the new medication cannot cure unless people change their lifestyles, I am
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undeniably the usefulness of the latest medicines yet.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • chronic conditions
  • holistic approach
  • preventive care
  • natural remedies
  • cultural heritage
  • ancestral knowledge
  • integration
  • complementary healthcare
  • regulation
  • standardization
  • scientific validation
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