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Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflects the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.

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Nowadays, there is no doubt advertising has a great impact
on sales increasing
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on increasing sales
. I agree that some big and not big brands are often sold without any necessity
on
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for
 them. But does advertising really have so much influence on people`s consciousness? Advertising takes
significant part
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a significant part
 in our life. We are surrounded by it everywhere. Sometimes advertising
help
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helps
 us to discover the new wares on the market, to make
choices but
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choices, but
 sometimes it leads to buying of unnecessary things.
For example
,
TV-production market
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the TV - production market
 always makes progress. Now the manufacturers offer TV-sets with 4K option, which gets trendy. Despite the fact that there are no channels and less films supporting
this
 option, people tend to replace their old devices. It is the visual example of marketing power.
Nevertheless
, I consider that
goods
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good
 promotion does not have so many
effect
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effects
 as they think. It
does not makes
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does not make
 customer purchase needless
wares
the waging of armed conflict against an enemy
wars
. The main number of people bye
for example
 new car because of economical reason: new car needs less maintenance. Others find new cars gorgeous. The
third
 wants to keep up with the times. In
conclusion I
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conclusion, I
 would say that
although
 many people are under
influence
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the influence
 of advertising, the key aspect of
goods
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good
 choice remains people`s needs.
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