In many western countries there is an increasing number of couples chosing to have no children.What are the advantages and disadvantages to couples having no children.

Nowadays, in different western countries a large number of people prefer to have no children. In
this
essay, I will discuss about the advantages and the disadvantages to couples who choosing to have no children.
First
and foremost, we can notice that many people prefer to be only a
couple
due to money. We all know that to have children costs a lot of money,
for example
for medical, health, for food, for education and so on. In my opinion, it is right that before partners have children they must have the opportunity to support them. I think
this
could be an advantage because
parterns
a person who requires medical care
patients
parents
could spend their own money only for them.
Secondly
, for what concerns me, I think that if
couple
Suggestion
a couple
the couple
decide to have no children they can live their life without responsibility.
Couple
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The couple
have more free time for themselves and they can do whatever they want.
For example
, they have not to think about taking children from school or from sport or think about their birthday parties or about graduation.
Furthermore
, the majority of people who live in the western countries have no chance to have no children due to their work. In fact, if we pay attention to the world we can notice that western people work about twenty four hours per day.
This
means having no time to have children.
However
, one of the biggest disadvantage is that
couple
won't have anyone to take care in their old age.
Moreover
,
couple
don't understand how is to be a mother or a father and they miss out of what many consider to be a crucial role. To conclude, I live in Italy so is a western country and I really want in my future to have children because I want to be as my mother.
Moreover
, I want to know how feel a mother when is pregnant and I really want to have
this
huge responsibility. But, In general western people decide to have no children because they waste too much time and they want to be free without any type of responsibility.
Submitted by ALEXIA MARTIS on

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