Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Healthy standard of living is desirable. To achieve

this

and combat overpopulation, some nations have imposed stringent rules on births per family; with violators facing strict punishments

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such

as taxation. In my opinion,

such

measures are completely rational and in

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essay I’ll shed light on different aspects

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justifying my view There

are

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a lot of negativity involved with overpopulation.

Firstly

earth’s resources

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the earth’s resources

are

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limited, let alone a nation’s.

Thus

, preservation of these resources, to ensure ‘some for all’, requires vigilant population planning.

For instance

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China and India are two of the highest populated countries.

Nonetheless

, they are not the same

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so what has made the difference

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During the end of 1970’s, China implemented a strict one-child policy that turned into two child policy by 2015.

Eventhough

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Even though

these regulations were harsh

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it resulted in China

being

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is being

now one of

the fast

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the fastest

developing countries. Whereas

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India without

such

rigorous rules

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till date remains undeveloped with

rapid exhaustion

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the rapid exhaustion

of resources.

Secondly

, overpopulation worldwide is associated with soaring rates of crime

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air pollution, poverty and illiteracy. To exemplify

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multiple number of children are usually evident in families with low socioeconomic status in undeveloped countries.

Hence

, with the implementation of taxes, not only people will understand the benefits of having a small family, but it will certainly be lucrative for the community as a whole.

Finally

, controlling the births per annum can result in

economic and social growth

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the economic and social growth

of the country. As healthy standards of living will be greatly appreciated and desired; children will grow to be more responsible citizens of the country. To

further

illustrate, according to an independent survey, families with one or two children tend to be happier, more educated and stable individuals of the society. In conclusion, I believe a government should have the authority to control the population by any means they see fit, including taxation. In my opinion, while these laws might seem

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to be

a bit strict

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in the long run they will be beneficial for the whole country.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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Fully explain your ideas

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