After working in your department for over 3 years, you feel the need to switch your department.Write a letter to your boss requesting a change in the department. In the letter mention: Why do you want to switch departments? Which department would you prefer? Why do you think you are a good fit in that department?

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Mehta, I am writing
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letter in regard to my keen interest
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an internal job posting (IJP) in
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within the organisation. At present, my association with the Leisure travel retail
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department has been more than 3 years. It has become prosaic now working for so long at
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profile. During my tenure in retail
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, I have encountered
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lots of Corporates.
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, I assume it will be
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right time to alter my job role and responsibility. Undoubtedly, I will be interested to join the MICE department for the upcoming years of my service.
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those who seek my advice in retail
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. My Current experience is well immune to add a remarkable value to MICE
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, which I would like to
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for the advancement of our organisation. My forte is into corporate dealing.
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, my acquired knowledge will make me a better fit for it. I hope you will grant
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permission for
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internal transfer. I shall look forward to seeing your positive response. Yours faithfully, Kalpana Raghav
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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