Education used to be a short period of training, but today, people treat it like a lifelong practice. Do you agree or disagree?

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is a continuous process which helps in the

mental

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Mental

development of the

person

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. I totally disagree with the statement. In

this

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essay,

refers to the speaker or writer

will discuss the views in opposition to the statement with my objectivity. To start with, ever since the human race started learning,

education

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becomes a part of

life

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, parents

teaches

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teach

their

childern

a young person of either sex

children

the ways of cooking, hunting and gathering food along with the communicating skills. Nowadays, the ways of

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has

changed but

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changed, but

the objective remains same, now

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to all those things, many new things are taught from science, history

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art and craft, in more organised and formal ways.

Education

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way

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a way

the way

not only to teach

them but

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them, but

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to empower them so that they could live a dignified

life

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independently.

Education

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cannot be confined to learning techniques, it is a process of understanding the things

arround

in the area or vicinity

around

you, refining your skill set and increasing the knowledge. Advancement of science and technology leads to new inventions every year, a

person

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wants to remain relevant in todays world needs to learn about them.

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, they will lag behind and become illiterate once the technology they learn to operate becomes outdated and replaced with new one. Apart from

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person

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a person

learn

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learns

something everyday in

life

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through newspapers, television or by talking with colleagues. Schools and colleges are not the only medium of imparting

education

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, they provide the qualification, certified

education

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is called qualification, it is a minimum requirement for the job.

Education

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is a part of evolution, a

person

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keep

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keeps

leaning new thing which leads him to evolve and grow. It is very important for human beings to always open themselves to the medium of learning

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making advancement in the field of science, technology and medicine. In conclusion,

education

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cannot be compared with training as living

life

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cannot be compared

with

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a job. To leave a legacy and set a positive precedence

person

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should keep his mind fresh by leaning new ideas and theories.

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only a

life

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will remain meaningful and jest of living will be there.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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343 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

finite
continuous lifelong process
global economy
technological advancements
knowledge-based economies
continuous learning
skill upgrading
unprecedented access
mindset
traditional academic
vocational training
obsolete
retraining
competitive
personal development
professional growth
enrich one's life
broaden perspectives
engage actively

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Education used to be a short period of training, but today, people treat it like a lifelong practice. Do you agree or disagree?

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Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?

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Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it should be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give you own opinion.