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The graph indicates the
oil
production
 since 2000-2015 in four different countries A
,
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,
B
,
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,
C
,
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,
d in millions of barrels per
day
. Overall
production
 of
oil
 shows the increasing level and decreasing level from the
betweeen
internal to, involving members of (a group of people)
between
 2000-2015. If you look into country
A
expresses position, direction or location, or point in time
at
 the
production
on
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in
for
 2000 was 4
miilion
(in Roman numerals, M written with a macron over it) denoting a quantity consisting of 1,000,000 items or units
million
barrels but
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barrels, but
then
 it decreased to 2
million
 barrels later to 1.8
million
 barrels
on
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in
 2005 but
on
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in
 2015 it boosted to 6
million
 barrels per
day
. The highest
oil
production
is taken
Suggestion
has taken
is taking
takes
 place in country C wherein 2000 and 2005 the
production
 was 6
million
 barrels per
day
 and it decreased in 2010 to 4
million
 barrels per
day
 but
then
 in 2015 it raised to 8
million
 barrels per
day
. The lowest
production
 of
oil
 took place in country B where
intially
at the beginning
initially
 the
production
 was 2
million
 barrels in the year 2000 later in 2005 it
inreased
made greater in size or amount or degree
increased
 to 3
million
 barrels
thereafter
 it decreased to 2.5
million
 barrels in the year 2010 and in 2015 the
oil
production
was
Suggestion
were
 4
million
 barrels. To
recapitulate we
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recapitulate, we
 can state the graph represent the
oil
production
 wherein we could see the
production
 taken place from
highest
Suggestion
the highest
 to the lowest in one
day
.
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