Some people think it is important to keep and maintain old buildings rather than replacing them with modern buildings. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

New buildings with modern architectural style suit really well in

this

generation of developing countries.

Although

destroying the old ones helps to improve the infrastructures, I absolutely agree that keeping it or renovating the buildings can educate us about historical events and

also

protect the environment. Knocking down the old building is a good strategy to get rid of the old-fashioned buildings and to improve the overall view of infrastructures.

Furthermore

, it is certain that old buildings usually require lots of space and it is critical to preserve it while the city is overcrowded due to the population growth.

However

, by demolishing all the old and valuable heritage that your ancestors have built is unacceptable. Numerous historical buildings, monuments, temples are renovated so that people in the

next

generation can learn its history and seek advantages from it.

For instance

, Angkor

Wat

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What

is the most valued masterpiece that every Cambodia’s citizen appreciates. In order to study the history of the Khmer Empire in the past, researchers take Angkor Wat as their book guiding their studies. Angkor

Wat

what thing

what

is

also

known as the symbol representing Cambodia and it attracts millions of tourists each year.

Moreover

, maintaining the old buildings preserve the environment because it helps

saving

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save

the materials that are used to build modern architecture. Once you start demolishing the old ones and constructing the new ones, tons of materials are being used

such

as clay, cement, bricks, concrete, woods. Since we need woods, we

then

have to knock down trees. Whenever a building is knocked down, the land loses its fertile soil and is damaged. After it has been constructed, we need painters, sprayers and

many

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much

more equipment to complete the building. To conclude, I acknowledge that knocking down the old-fashioned buildings has its own

reason but

Accept comma addition

reason, but

preserving it

also

benefits the young generation to be educated in history and secure the environment.