Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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fees have been inexorably increasing in recent years, the affordability

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Higher education has always been a topic of interest. It is argued that the Government should abolish college

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fees, irrespective of students’ socioeconomic background.

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thinking is valid to a certain extent, I believe that Waiving

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would have an adverse bearing on both students and society. There are many compelling reasons why students should be allowed to pursue college without

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. On the individual level, bachelor’s degree holders, especially The underprivileged, will stand a better chance of landing higher-paid jobs and Bettering their life quality. On the societal level, a surge in the gross enrolment Rate, prompted by a free-college policy, would give rise to a more educated Workforce.

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acts as a precursor to not only a thriving economy but

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a Civilized society. Despite the aforementioned benefits, I would contend that the provision of

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, in fact, can do both the beneficiaries and society a

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. The impact of most

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employment is questionable At best. The job market has become very competitive as it is, even for job seekers With college qualifications.

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, if everyone is entitled to university, it is no

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feasible for them to find a job, let alone the financial abundance previously So often associated with the acquisition of a tertiary degree.

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, The enormous cost incurred to cover higher education

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will put a strain On government coffers, leading to budget deficits, tax hikes, or reduced welfare Among others. In conclusion,

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the potential benefits of university

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like a good idea, I believe that the government should not do it for free Everyone.