You are getting married. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend to invite him/her to the wedding. In your letter - describe who you are going to marry, - tell what will happen on the wedding day (the schedule), - explain why it’s important him/her to be at the wedding.

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Dear Kajal, I hope you and your family are doing well. I am very glad to inform you that I am going to get married and I’m writing

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letter to invite you

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occasion. You feel shocked after knowing the person's name to whom I marry because he is our school classmate Piyush Vekariya and you know him very well that he is

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loving and caring person.

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, after completing a Master Degree in

USA

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, he is doing a job in a multinational company as a post of CEO and earned

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salary. The wedding date is 9-February-2021 and I hope you will come before a week of my wedding, because, you promised me that you definitely come to India for a long time of period during my merger when I came to your home from

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vacation. The marriage ceremony starts on 8th February with the dance and music night and

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day I get hitched with Piyush and on the 9th reception party is held. Our all old school friend is coming in my marriage, so it is a great opportunity for spending time with each other after a long time. And without

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is empty vessels for us. That’s why it is very vital for you to attend my ceremony for our friendship. And I am 100% sure that you enjoy lots here and its better opportunity to meet my all kith and kin. When you book tickets and make plans

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inform me, so I drop you from the airport. I would love to see you soon. Take care and write back. Your loving friend, Sejal

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

275 words

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