Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as learning tool, which is why children are less educated today. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

It it irrefutable that, children spend most of the hours in a day on watching cartoons and other programmes, which is a huge concern for parents. They hold the belief that,

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the specified day of the month

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doubt

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offsprings do not

concentarte

make denser, stronger, or purer

concentrate

more on

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study

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the study

studies

and

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less educated.

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do accord with

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notion to every extent and following treatise will explicit the reasons behind the same. The

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and foremost reason is that, misuse of television. Many children took benefit of

parents absence

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the parents' absence

parents' absence

parent's absence

at home and watch irrelevant things.

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Moreover they

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Moreover, they

prefer more to watch cartoons or other programmes which interest them, than the informative channels and books. To illustrate it,

invenention

the creation of something in the mind

invention

of smart television has made the situation

worst

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worse

to some extent. Nowadays, more options

has been provided

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have been provided

for kids through internet

too and

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too, and

to and

to to and

episodes could be saved for

long

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a long time

time

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. Another

complelling

driving or forcing

compelling

argument in

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that, books

inhance

increase

enhance

enhanced

enhances

knowledge. In order to

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a book more concentration is required. The

study

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materials provide you more knowledge and enhance your personality. To exemplify

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, Books has

ots

a large number or amount

lots

of knowledge in it and a survey in "

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northern region of India where Hinduism predominates

Hindustan

times"

demostrated

having been demonstrated or verified beyond doubt

demonstrated

demonstrate

that, those who

study

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throgh

from beginning to end

through

books remember the thing for

long

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a long time

time

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in

comaprison

the act of examining resemblances

comparison

of those who grab things visually.

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addition they

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addition, they

have less memory and spend a lot of

time

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reading books. To

recpitulate

summarize briefly

recapitulate

, after contemplating, it can be stated that, it is

beyong

the state or fact of existing

being

doubt that television can ever take

place

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the place

of books.

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However parents

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However, parents

should keep an eye to children to check over the things they watch and should

spen

pass time in a specific way

spend

spin

a

spceific

(sometimes followed by 'to') applying to or characterized by or distinguishing something particular or special or unique

specific

time

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on watching cartoons.