Some people think that formal education should start for children as early as possible. While others think that it should not start until 7 years of age. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Education is the cornerstone of an individual’s future. Many people often argued that children should start their formal tutoring as soon as possible while some oppose that it should start after the preschool time.

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essay will depict both perspectives and I believe that children must start the studies after they are 7 years old. To commence with, it is believed that the earlier children start to learn, the better their intelligence will be as a child’s mind grasps fast in developing stage.

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, they will learn to be competitive and motivated to attain their desired target,

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nature will be helpful in

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world of tough competition.

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learn the technique in early stage.

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, various people believe that a child should learn creative things till the age of seven as it will help their mind to work fast, in an innovative manner.

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, initial over-burden of studies lead to stress and

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, children lose interest in studying and sometimes it is extremely difficult for them to even pass the high school. To exemplify, in recent survey western countries which start formal teaching

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. In my opinion, youngsters should start school lately because they can learn more through play-based activities in order to develop their minds more effectively. To conclude, education at an early stage can increase stress level, which might often lead to play less in order to complete homework. So, young students should be encouraged to play more to enhance brain activity resulting in good future.