Both governments and individuals are spending vast amount of money protecting animals and their habitats. This money could be better spent dealing with fundamental issues in sociely such as poverty and health care. To what extent do you agree?

It is commonly believed by some people that massive amount of money should be used for resolve poverty issue and enhance a

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care service for people

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of utilizing to save wildlife. Even I agree that massive endangered animal need to be urgently protected, I believe that the government require to invest in facility to save and protect its citizens’ lives.

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with, climate change and natural disaster cause more severe impact

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the natural habitat of wildlife and most of the species already extinct than they were in the past.

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crisis continues to occur as human activities exacerbate the current environmental situation, which leads to high rate of death of endangered animals.

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, the

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in Australia, which frequently occur in every year;

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, it is worsened in 2020 according to the highest record of the temperature and so

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event killed more than 1 billion local animals within three months. From

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situation, in order to save of koalas and kangaroos from extinction, Australia government requires to inject a large amount of money to save

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a life

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and recreate habitats for those animals.

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, wildlife and environmental concern still needed support from all stakeholders.

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, social service has to improve for a safety of people. If basic facilities

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as

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care is not available to all citizens to access, a thousand of people in poverty countries will be in danger.

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, the Covid-19, the current pandemic that cause a thousand of death in India, where underprivileged people cannot afford to receive a

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care service. The public sector needs to invest on building temporary hospital and support free check up to control the infected rate of people within the country so that underprivileged people will not suffer from

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crisis. In conclusion,

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environment and endangered species required for money from public and private sector to donate for reserving, poverty and social benefit in

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sector

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need to be developed in parallel to protect human’s lives.