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You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter Explain why you want to take time off work Give details of the amount of time you need Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

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Dear Bob, I am writing
this
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 letter to let you know that I need to take some leaves from
office
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the office
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this
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 month. As
i
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I
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 promised my wife to take her on vacation in
summer
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the summer
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 to spend some quality time together. So we have planned to visit a quieter place in the mid of
June
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this
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 year. I hope you will consider my situation favourably. Please allow me to give the details of
dates
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the dates
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 I would be off
work
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. To be more specific, I would be going on vacation from
June
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 20th, 2020 to
June
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 27th 2020. As
June
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 20th and
June
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 21st is my week off so there will be total
six
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of six
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 days I would be unable to come to
office
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the office
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. While on vacation, I am thinking to do the unavoidable
work
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 remotely. I have
also
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 talked to my colleague 'Rohan'
to
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about
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 most of the
work
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 in my
absense
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absence
. The rest of the
work
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 I will cover after rejoining the office. Thank you for your consideration. Yours Sincerely Raj
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Respectful greeting (e.g., 'Dear [Manager's name],')
  • Time off, absence, leave of absence
  • Personal circumstances, compelling reason
  • Duration, number of days/weeks
  • Cover duties, delegate tasks, work handover
  • Alternative arrangements, contingency plans
  • Preparation, advance work, assistance
  • Gratitude, appreciate, understanding
  • Inconvenience, minimal disruption
  • Request approval, formally request
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