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Many efforts have been made by countries to address problems concerning the environment but the system has not improved. What are the possible reasons and solutions of this situation?

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It is undoubtedly true that
environment
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the environment
 is our shared inheritance and maintaining its good health is everyone's responsibility. Numerous initiatives have been taken to upkeep
environment but
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environment, but
 desirable outcomes not achieved yet.
This
 essay will look for the probable reading and solutions to combat
this
 situation in subsequent paragraphs. Discussing the reason, paramount one is the lack of coordinated activities between various countries. Every nation plans their
environment
 improvement initiatives based on their preferences and comfort considering local conditions.
For example
, India's preference is to replace non-renewable sources
to
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of
 energy to renewable sources like electricity, solar panels, etc.
to
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To
 save
environment
 degradation.
However
, USA is focussing to cut down pollution. Due to these uncoordinated efforts, desirable results are not achieved. Every nation is contributing a
bit but
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bit, but
 in haphazard direction, which results in nullifying each other's efforts and poor condition prevails. Out of all the solutions for addressing
environmental concern
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environmental concerns
, the strongest one is the need of federal
system
 having one central governing body with subordinate bodies at various
countries
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countries'
country
level
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levels
.
This
 kind of
system
 ensures coordinated efforts and directional flow of communication.
For example
, WHO is
international body
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an international body
 with
aim
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the aim
an aim
 to upkeep good health conditions of citizen in all countries and have subordinate bodies in each country, which acts in close coordination with WHO and their respective country. WHO efforts in controlling COVID-19 pandemic is worth
praisable
liable to perish; subject to destruction or death or decay
perishable
. In the same way, desired outcomes can be expected by implementing
similar
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a similar system
similar systems
system
 to address climate related issues.
Thus
, to conclude, it can be
finally
 commented that uncoordinated activities are the root cause
for
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of
 non improvement in
environment
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environmental
 conditions and
federal
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the federal system
federal systems
system
, similar to WHO, is required to gain desirable results.
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