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One way to solve the problem of traffic is to increase the tax on private vehicles. State your opinion and give example

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PEOPLE TEND TO THINK DIFFERENT ON A SINGLE Issue AS SOME SUGGEST THAT IN ORDER TO UPDRADE TRAFFIC SITUATION
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 SHOULD IMPOSE MORE TAX ON PRIVATE CAR OWNERS, WHILE OTHERS POSSESS THE OPPOSITE MINDSET. IN MY OPINION, Proper PLANNING
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 OF TAXATION SHOULD Be Administered WITH A VIEW TO SOLVING
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 CRISIS. ON THE ONE HAND, IN MOST OF THE COUNTRIES ESPECIALLY DEVELOPING ONE'S, TRAFFIC SYSTEM IS NOT UP TO THE MARK.
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, PEOPLE HAVE NOTHING, BUT TO adopt CARS AS NOT ONLY MAJORITY OF THE BUSES, METROS ARE OLD, BUT
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 THEY DO NOT MAINTAIN PROPER SCHEDULE. SO, FOR PERFORMING EVERYDAY TASKS
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 AS GOING TO OFFICE OR SHOOPING AS WELL AS BRINGING CHILDRE TO SCHOOL THEY need THEIR OWN VEHICLE.
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, JAKARTA, THE CAPITAL OF INDONESIA, TOOK SEVERAL STANCE, WIDENING ROADS, EXECUTING STRICT travel RULES, AND BANNING OF OUTDATED CARS PLYING ON ROADS, TO AMELIORATE gridlock. SO, IT IS IMPERATIVE FOR
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 TO UNDERTAKE THESE TYPES OF STANCE TO SOLVE
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 EMERGENCY.
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, MOST OF THE MEGA CITIES ARE SUFFERING FROM HEAVY TRAFFIC AS WELL AS POLLUTION.
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, CONTROLLING AUTHORITY SHOULD PUT REIN ON THE usage OF THEIR OWN MEDIUM OF TRANSPORT.
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, A FEW YEARS AGO, A CHINESE CITY, BEIJING, REQUESTED ITS INHABITANTS TO practice CITY SERVICES RATHER THAN USING CARS, AND
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 PRAGMATIC STEP PLUMMETED GRIDLOCK BY MORE THAN 50%. SO, PUTTING MORE levy ON LAVISH CARS MAY BE BENEFICIAL. BUT IT HAS SEVERAL PITFALLS AS IF THE
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 OFFICIALS ARE CORRUPT,
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 COLLECTION OF MONEY WILL BE NOTHING BUT WASTAGE.
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, IT WILL CREATE BURDEN ON THE PEOPLE WHO HAVE NO CHOICE BUT TO DRIVE EVERYDAY. IN CONCLUSION,
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 SHOULD ADOPT CERTAIN GROUNDBREAKING DECISIONS
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 AS INTRODUCING METRO SERVICES, FOLLOWING ROAD SIGNS IN ORDER TO RELIEVE ITS CITIZENS From
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 DISASTER. NO COURSE OF ACTION
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 LEVYING TAX WILL BRING A PRAGMATIC SOLUTION TO
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 EVERLASTING PROBLEM.

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