Nowadays environmental problems are too big to be managed by individual persons or individual countries. In other words, it is an international problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, environmental problems have caused a lot of concern. Some people argue that those problems are too much to be handled by individual people or a single government and it should be an international concern. I think making environmental problems an international responsibility is necessary. People on the earth shared the same

planet

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planet, thus

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they

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shared

pollution

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, especially air and water

pollution

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. Air is always moving from one area to another, bring the

pollution

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with it. Air

pollution

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can cause

damage especially

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damage, especially

to human lungs. Greenhouse gasses from any place can cause global warming and it is the most significant cause of ice melting in the northern area.

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, some areas near the beach and small islands might sink due to the increasing

ocean

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water level. If Indonesia, a country with the biggest number of small islands, does everything it can to reduce greenhouse gas production, but other countries keep releasing greenhouse gasses

to

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into

the air. Sooner or later, some island in Indonesia will sink. The earth

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shared water

pollution

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in the

ocean

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,

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as

garbage

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.

Garbage

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in the

ocean

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can kill marine lives. More and more fish, birds and other animals were found with

garbage

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in their belly. There is a village in Japan that declares themselves zero waste and Japan's government is supporting

zero waste movement

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the zero waste movement

.

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, their oceans still have

garbage

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from people from other countries. People in the world must stop throwing waste into the river and the

ocean

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, for the

ocean

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to be cleared

from

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of

garbage

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.In conclusion, people in the world and all countries have a responsibility to protect the environment. There should be a limited number of

pollution

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and

garbage

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that a country can produce. To achieve that, the government should bring more awareness, educate and control their industry and citizens to reduce environmental damage. If the international community works together for the environment, it can reduce the damage from environmental problems.