Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of old houses in local areas. Others think that people should have freedom to build houses of their own style. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people think that people should build new houses that have to follow the old-fashioned styles in their places, while others think that it is unnecessary to keep the
culture
. In my opinion, I believe that people have to build new houses that have to follow the special style
if that place has a unique style
.
In some special places, such
as old ancient villages, people have to follow the culture
if they come there to earn money to live themselves and their family due to some advantages of the local remarkable style
. Hoi An
, Suggestion
A
for example
, which is located in the Central of Vietnam, has a remarkable style
. Thanks to the ancient style
of Hoi An
Suggestion
A
culture
, people being living
in there can have more job opportunities that are related to tourism, Suggestion
been living
have been living
has been living
have lived
such
as tour guiders and selling some human basic needs. Thanks to the development of tourism, people who are living Hoi An
have a better condition, which is an element in the development in economy of Vietnam. In conclusion, in some specific places, extraordinary Suggestion
A
style
has a good deal of advantages, therefore
, people have to follow the style
in some special localities.
In other places like metropolises, people, thus
, do not need to follow to trend or the culture
to build a new house
. In fact, people have been coming to metropolises to settle down and earn money to live their family, although
the unreasonable price and the fast pace of life. Thus
, it is cultural mixed in metropolises. People, moreover
, might be much more comfortable when they build a new freestyle house
. In summary, it is unnecessary to build a new house
that has to follow the culture
in major cities.
To sum up, thanks to some massively positive results of old-fashioned style
houses in some specific localities, people have to follow the style if
they are going to settle down and earn money to live there. Accept comma addition
style, if
Moreover
, people living in other places do not need to follow the culture
, thus
, they can build a new house
which is comfortable with them.Submitted by Hg Alexander on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite