Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? What are the drawbacks?

Nowadays,
numbers
Suggestion
the numbers
of students who`s studying overseas have dramatically gone up, learning in a foreign country gives both positive and negative impacts for the students and the countries they are studying.
First
of all, in my experience when you
study
in a foreign country you will mingle with different students from different countries.
This
gives them the opportunity to learn about various countries and their cultures. They will learn to work with different nationalities, because of that they will get a very good understanding about what other people are like. Most likely that will contribute
to eliminate
Suggestion
to eliminating
racism up to a certain extent.
However
, when you
Study
abroad you
Accept comma addition
abroad, you
have to leave your parents, your siblings, cousins and your friends. Sometimes when young people age around 18 to 24 when they living far from
parents they
Accept comma addition
parents, they
tend to do things that they were not allowed to do while they were under their parents. Like using alcohol, tobacco sometimes even drugs. If they
addicts
Suggestion
are addicted
to those things they will lose their path and waste all of the
money
they spent for the education.
Biggest drawback
Suggestion
The biggest drawback
of studying in abroad is parents have to spend most of their saving’s to maintain the child in the university;
this
could lead them for a
life time
the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifetime
debt. These days most of the foreign countries encourage overseas students to come and
study
in their counties, Because of the income they are bringing
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
the countries. International student’s contribution
for
Suggestion
to
the economy in countries
such
as United States, United Kingdom and Australia is at least more than 20 percent.
This
is a big advantage for those countries. But sometimes because of international student`s doing any work they can do to find their course fee and
money
for accommodation, young local people have to struggle finding jobs these days. Sum up, new generation like to
study
in overseas countries. If students
study
well until complete their courses they will get benefits in future. But if they addict to things they should never do that will waste
money
. Countries will earn
lot
Suggestion
a lot
of
money
because of international students.
Submitted by Umesh Karunaratne on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: