online shopping seems to be replacing the traditional method of buying. however some buyers are sceptical to this practice. discuss both benefits and risks associated with online shopping
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consumer
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risks
on the other hand
they should also
take the benefits of shopping goods online.Submitted by rajat mangukiya on
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task response
Provide more specific and relevant examples to support your points about benefits and risks of online shopping.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure a clear introduction and conclusion that summarize the main points of the essay and provide a strong thesis statement.
Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...