A few languages are increasingly spoken in different countries, while the usage of others is rapidly declining. Is this a positive or a negative development?

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It is true that some languages are

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more popular,

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other languages are at risk because of the decrease in the number of

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. Personally, I believe that

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trend

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have

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both

advantages

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and

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disadvantages. On the one hand, I believe

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trend

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could bring about some

advantages

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. The rising number of

user

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of some

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language

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languages

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means the spreading of globalisation. Nowadays, We can see that

people

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in developing countries

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exposed to higher education.

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, there are an increasing number of

people

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, who are bilingual, or even trilingual.

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helps to promote

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commerce with developed countries, which

bring

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a huge profit for the local

economics

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, a person can have

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higher salary if he or she

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fluently speak English.

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this

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trend

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mean

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the

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communication with

people

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from other nations could be more easy. Knowing another

language

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provide

people

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with

opportunity

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the opportunity

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to make more friends and have

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a more

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exciting experience. A good example is that they can go abroad for university. On the

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the

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hand,

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trend

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could have some negative impacts.

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language

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results

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the

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losing a culture.

Language

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is the essential characteristic of a culture which

help

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to differentiate between two languages. If a country

get

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rid of their culture, a

nation

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pride is

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too. Which could even lead to the collapse of a whole nation. To put

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the

nut shell

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, as a coin has two sides there are

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some disadvantages and

advantages

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of a problem. I believe that government should

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measures to take

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advantages

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of the benefits and limit the drawbacks.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

269 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

global linguistics
cultural heritage
diversity tapestry
economic growth
technological innovation
educational opportunities
linguistic imperialism
marginalizing
homogeneity
ecological knowledge
social cohesion
communication barriers
national unity

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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