A few languages are increasingly spoken in different countries, while the usage of others is rapidly declining. Is this a positive or a negative development?

It is true that some languages are
become
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more popular,
while
other languages are at risk because of the decrease in the number of
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. Personally, I believe that
this
trend
have
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both
advantages
and
also
disadvantages. On the one hand, I believe
this
trend
could bring about some
advantages
. The rising number of
user
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of some
language
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means the spreading of globalisation. Nowadays, We can see that
people
in developing countries
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exposed to higher education.
Therefore
, there are an increasing number of
people
, who are bilingual, or even trilingual.
This
helps to promote
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commerce with developed countries, which
bring
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a huge profit for the local
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.
For instance
, a person can have
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higher salary if he or she
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fluently speak English.
Additionally
,
this
trend
mean
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the
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communication with
people
from other nations could be more easy. Knowing another
language
provide
people
with
opportunity
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the opportunity
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to make more friends and have
more
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exciting experience. A good example is that they can go abroad for university. On the
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the
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hand,
this
trend
could have some negative impacts.
The losing
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a
language
can
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in
the
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losing a culture.
Language
is the essential characteristic of a culture which
help
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to differentiate between two languages. If a country
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rid of their culture, a
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pride is
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too. Which could even lead to the collapse of a whole nation. To put
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the
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, as a coin has two sides there are
also
some disadvantages and
advantages
of a problem. I believe that government should
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measures to take
advantages
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advantage
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of the benefits and limit the drawbacks.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global linguistics
  • cultural heritage
  • diversity tapestry
  • economic growth
  • technological innovation
  • educational opportunities
  • linguistic imperialism
  • marginalizing
  • homogeneity
  • ecological knowledge
  • social cohesion
  • communication barriers
  • national unity
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