Many agriculture lands are being converted Into commercial centres. How does this affect the environment and people's life style. Discuss the situation and provide suggestion.
Increasing population has completed green
agriculture
lands to convert into residential colonies and shopping centres. This
condition has passed threat
of global warming and scarcity of food grains. Suggestion
the threat
Impact
of Suggestion
The impact
this
situation
on environment
along with suggestions to tackle Suggestion
the environment
this
situation
will be discussed in subsequent paragraphs.
Discussing the situation
, the paramount effect is deforestation, which increases the temperature of the region and result in global warming. For example
, as per report
published in Hindustan Times, green cover in Suggestion
the report
a report
Delhi-NCR region
has diminished by 17% in Suggestion
the Delhi - NCR region
last decade
and average temperature has Suggestion
the last decade
shoot
up by 3 Suggestion
shot
degree
Suggestion
degrees
celcius
, which is a frightful Swedish astronomer who devised the centigrade thermometer (1701-1744)
Celsius
situation
. Additional to this
, job losses of people engaged in farming business is
a big threat, which Suggestion
are
also
spike the crime rate due to unemployment. For instance
, as per report
published by Nav Bharat Times, Suggestion
the report
a report
crime rate
in Bihar has increased by 23% in Suggestion
the crime rate
last decade
because Suggestion
the last decade
agriculture
land is diminishing year on year and people are getting unemployed.
Out of all the suggestions to counter this
situation
, the strongest
one is to offer heavy compensation to the farmers when their green lands are acquired by the government so that they can buy Suggestion
the stronger
agriculture
lands at other locations or to start a business. For example
, as per study compensation amount for farms is highest in Greater Noida City
and the farmers generally buys new Suggestion
the Greater Noida City
agriculture
lands in other districts from that money. Another suggestion is to offer confirmed allotment of shops for farmers in the shopping centres so that they can earn rental income for their livelihood. For example
, DDA allots shops in their commercial center
to the farmers, who gave their fields for an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
development work
of the city.
In a nutshell, it Suggestion
the development work
hae
been evident from the discussion in have or possess, either in a concrete or an abstract sense
has
above paragraphs
that suggested solutions are best suited to handle Suggestion
the above paragraphs
this
condition because interest of both employment and environment are considered while deriving these solutions.Submitted by Sunil Sahu on
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