computers are being used more and more in education and so there will soon be no role of teachers in education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Computers Have indeed become an essential tool for teachers and

students

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in all areas of education and the role of instructor has

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essay.

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some people say studying from computers

provide

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ease to

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as they can pause the videos and learn at their own pace , I believe ,

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can guide them better in

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more effective way.

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what is being described in

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, he can go through it again and again but it does not sure that he will get

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that particular lesson can be well explained with any number of questions to clear all doubts.

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can make out from the behaviour of

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and can

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way of teaching or even can turn the tables to make it

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session to make it more effective. Learners with low IQ can be focused more and provided with learning

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materials

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, some people think that pupils can download a huge amount of information related to their subject with just the click of the mouse.But I have different thoughts as lots and lots of information can only confuse,the one

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to get some specific information and ends up somewhere lost in

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of details. So to set the road map and guide them in that

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direction

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knowledge ,

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presence is

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. To recapitulate,

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role can never be questionable to make

students

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educated both academically and socially as

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believe human aspects of good teaching are never to be replaced by computers.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

282 words

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computers are being used more and more in education and so there will soon be no role of teachers in education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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