Some educationalists think international exchange visit will benefit teenagers at the school. To what extent do the advantage outweigh the disadvantage.

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Specialists believe that international exchange programs are helpful for students
for
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in
their
further
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education.
Although
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, these programs provide
opportunity
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an opportunity
opportunities
for young students to experience
different culture
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different cultures
a different culture
and learn cooperation and tolerance, some students struggle in a new environment.
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, it is apparent that its advantages outweigh its disadvantages. International educational programs are beneficial for students, where they interact with people belongs to different cultures and learn new languages and traditions. As extremism is common in recent society, people interact with
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
on the basis of their appearance and backgrounds. While these programs broaden their mind to accept people of various backgrounds by providing a common platform. Ultimately, students get the concept of
cooperate
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cooperating
learning and tolerance.
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, Pakistanis and Indians live and study together in foreign countries. Whereas, the relationship between these countries is not good. The only disadvantage is
struggle
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the struggle
of the international pupil in
unfamiliar environment
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an unfamiliar environment
unfamiliar environments
. Every country has its own culture, traditions and
regularities so
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regularities, so
it is obvious for a new one to survive. These problems will affect their academic performance and few lose their hope and motivation.
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, my brother got admission in Germany, he had struggled for a long period and
this
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create
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creates
problem
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problems
a problem
the problem
in his education. Language was a barrier for him. It is stated that foreign study programs are more advantageous for youngsters as they provide an opportunity to explore a new world with a new culture and it
also
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develop a habit of acceptance of versatility. But some students fail to adopt the new environment and lose
this
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opportunity of better education.
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