Wealthy nations should assist poor countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree?
During environmental disasters, rich countries certainly help rouge
nation
on humanitarian ground. This
essay agrees with this
statement because financially stable nation
can accommodate all the portfolios and poor countries cannot afford to finance all the sectors.
First
and foremost, during a natural calamity rich nation
can facilitate each and every sector with finance easily
. Highly revenue is generated in government’s public expenditure via tax, can be used to accommodate the affected part of the society. Suggestion
eased
Public
is well versed with the finance to withstand any calamity. Suggestion
The public
For instance
, In America, every section of people has to pay ten percent of their income in tax. This
not only fills the government reserves but
Accept comma addition
reserves, but
also
utilized during the disasters. Therefore
, they can sponcer
a poor assume sponsorship of
sponsor
nation
during disaster
.
While, the poorer country cannot afford to burden its public purse by revenue Suggestion
a disaster
disasters
the disaster
generation
from Suggestion
generated
tax
. People are not employed with high wages to be taxed. Suggestion
the tax
Unemployment rate
is at its peak. Suggestion
The unemployment rate
Government
is unstable to address the basic social issues like poverty, infrastructure and education. Suggestion
The government
For example
, Sirya
is the worst affected countries in term of education to the children as per recent United Nations press release. So, How can they accommodate each sector during environmental calamity. an Asian republic in the Middle East at the east end of the Mediterranean; site of some of the world's most ancient centers of civilization
Syria
Hence
, Should be guided by rich countries with finances to overcome the rescue burden.
To summarize, I strongly agree in
terms, to accommodate the poorer countries by rich nations to overcome the disaster with financial help. Suggestion
on
with
Otherwise
, the poorer country can become rouge nation
and can never be pulled out of the dire situation.Submitted by Sherin Samson on
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