In some countries today, there is an attitude that ‘anyone can do it’ in the arts – music, literature, acting, art, etc. As a result, people with no talent become rich and famous and genuine talent is not valued or appreciated. Do you agree or disagree?

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Art is a sound from within that people express in multiple forms. It is often argued that the outlook of ‘anyone can become artist’ – in arts

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as music, literature, acting and art, leads people who lack

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to become wealthy and popular. While the others who really possess the

caliber

a degree or grade of excellence or worth

calibre

calipers

are not being appreciated. I totally disagree

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with

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and believe that the everyone has a

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arts

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the arts

, whether that

talent

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remains hidden longer or gets exposed sooner. To oppose

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firstly

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, I think that becoming wealthier or richer is the by-product of the qualities

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possesses and cannot come without possessing the capability. It could be the case that the qualities do not

exposed

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expose

for certain reasons, but that cannot be equated saying the person is having

dearth

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a dearth

talent

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, the very well-known voice now, was rejected almost 10 times by All India Radio

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stations

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Later when

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Later, when

his

talent

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was recognized, he not only earned fame and money but

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respect in society.

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, saying ‘no

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’ is absolutely wrong since

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is quite a subjective word and everyone has it in

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or the other form. To defy

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, I put forward the

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reason as the recognition of

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sets

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no boundary to the other to get valued. Even if a less skilled person earns the rewards earlier, that doesn’t mean the chances of the more skilled reduce as the field of art is vast enough to accommodate any and every kind of

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, people have accepted hundreds and thousands of writers, poets, singers, painters, irrespective of number of artists, genre of music and different taste of

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the arts

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, only the sky is the limit for arts and popularity or wealth earned by

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has no serious effect on the acceptance of other artists. In conclusion, artistic

talent

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is a possession that every individual has, that brings to

him

male possessive pronoun

his

wealth and makes him renowned. I strongly disagree that the people who become rich or famous have no talents and their becoming so, puts any restriction on the growth of the others.

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