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Being a celebrity such as a famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

#celebrity #film #star #sports #personality
It is true that child
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
 is illegal in many countries like Singapore, Japan, or Canada. In my opinion,
this
 trend can be extremely positive for children, but it can cause issues in certain circumstances. Children should not be allowed to
work
 full-time as an employee for several reasons.
Firstly
, they are easy to get injured due to a lack of full reasoning and problem-solving abilities.
This
 means that operating the same machines, they may not be able to realize when the
dangerous
Suggestion
danger
 will come.
Secondly
,
instead
 of working full-time in different occupations, they should attend
school
. Without a formal education, they only have limited choices in
job market
Suggestion
the job market
.
Finally
, children are more likely to be exploited and
work
 in poor conditions, as they may have no idea about their right in the workplace. To make child
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
 illegal can be a problem. In poor families, children may be the breadwinner to raise the whole family and without their contribution to the family, their family may suffer. In Africa, many parents want their children to
work
 full time to support basic family living costs like, foods and drinks, accommodation, or paying bills in order to reduce the financial burden of the whole family
effectively
Suggestion
effectiveness
. In other families, some students drop out of
school
 at an early age. These children have nothing to do and are easy to join gangs or other illegal activities if they are not allowed to
work
 full time. In conclusion, the regulations to prohibit child
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
 can benefit people in most cases, as it helps to reduce unnecessary injury, encourage children to go back to
school
 and ensure they
are not
Suggestion
are not working
work
 under exploitation.
However
, it can be negative for poor families and for children who leave
school
 early.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Public scrutiny
  • Intrusive
  • Endorsements
  • Sponsorships
  • Financial security
  • High-profile collaborations
  • Social influence
  • Philanthropic efforts
  • Trust issues
  • Mental health challenges
  • Substance abuse
  • Pressures of celebrity
  • Expectations
  • Disconnect from reality
  • Normalcy
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