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Some say that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunity to help others. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The concept of being wealthy differs among people who possess different perspectives to live across the world, especially some humans having a religion in which becoming rich without enough helping to other people is blamed. I strongly support the idea that the most valuable of being rich is the ability of giving aid to others.
To begin
 with, it is worth to say that the wealth is not only possessing money or treasures
such
 as gold, diamond and other expensive assets, but
also
 having a huge amount of knowledge in a special area of science in which people can show they are rich by teaching other persons or contributes their knowledge by writing books. In the case, individuals would be wealthy when they develop what they know about scientific topics using the interaction with persons who need their helping in that area. In the other words, being a scientist, as being rich in the field of knowing, is meaningful if the person gives aid to others in her or his skills area.
Furthermore
, helping poor people who extremely need money for their problems grants us a satisfying sense causing pleasant of living.
Therefore
, when we are rich, we have an opportunity for helping other people, and it directly gives us a chance to changing our routine lives into a beautiful one by denoting a part of our money to help others.
For example
, establishing a charity school causes many lovely children
be
Suggestion
are being
 always grateful us, and it gives us the satisfaction sense. In conclusion, I agree with people who believe that being rich is meaningful when persons use their wealth for helping other humans.
Submitted by Baran B on

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