Many people are copying famous celebrities from magazines and TV. Why is this happening? Do you think it’s good idea to copy celebrities?

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often seen that many people who are a fan of famous celebrities try to copy their characters or other sides of them. It’s

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today that our children who are around 8-12 years old are always able to be like famous people that they watched on

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or saw on journals.

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, it must be recognised that if people try to copy many popular celebrities, it would change his or her

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to goodness. In

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example clearly shows that if people is showing on

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or in many different magazines are successful, clever or capable with any ability, it must always be copied by other human who is trying to be like him or her.

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, there are more people who play many roles for different advertisements on

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other watching lines than people who play roles for educational

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They all change human’s mind and their capability all accept

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, genius and businessmen. Nowadays, there are many factories which are making lots of fake advertisements on

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to multiply the number of their unreal products. So, after that while children watching

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, they seen famous person who is using low-quality products that they advertised for big money. After all children will be fussy and demand their parents to buy these fake products to be alike famous people that they saw on

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or journal. I strongly disagree with

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. In conclusion, according to the goodness of

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I think it depends on people who is copying famous celebrities and person who is being copied with his or her popular quality.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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390 words

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Many people are copying famous celebrities from magazines and TV. Why is this happening? Do you think it’s good idea to copy celebrities?

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The amount of sport shown on television every week has increased significantly and this is having an impact on live sports events. Do you think the benefits of having more televised sport are greater than the disadvantages?

Currently, there is a trend towards alternative forms of medicine. However, at the best these methods are ineffective, and worst, they may be dangerous. In what extend do you agree with this statement.