Many people are copying famous celebrities from magazines and TV. Why is this happening? Do you think it’s good idea to copy celebrities?

In many parts of the
world it’s
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world, it’s
often seen that many people who are a fan of famous celebrities try to copy their characters or other sides of them. It’s
common
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a common problem
problem
today that our children who are around 8-12 years old are always able to be like famous people that they watched on
TV
or saw on journals.
This
can be
seen it’s
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seen, it’s
quite true, but according to the world, there are many sides of
this
is happening.
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essay will discuss
advantages
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the advantages
or
disadvantages and
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disadvantages, and
both sides of the
problem
.
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.
Fristly
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Firstly
, it must be recognised that if people try to copy many popular celebrities, it would change his or her
worldview
to goodness. In
this
case, I strongly agree with
this
idea. Take Steave
Jobs
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Jobs, for
for example
. He was one of the richest
man
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men
in the world. Or take Bill Gates for
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
instance. They were the most
succesful
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
people in the planet cause of their individuality and characteristics.
This
is the strongest evidence of my opinion.
This
example clearly shows that if people is showing on
TV
or in many different magazines are successful, clever or capable with any ability, it must always be copied by other human who is trying to be like him or her.
On the other hand
, there are some disadvantage sides of
this
.
For example
, there are more people who play many roles for different advertisements on
TV
other watching lines than people who play roles for educational
characterical
programs. So,
this
is a big reason that I disagree with
this
side of the
problem
.
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.
They all change human’s mind and their capability all accept
clevers
annual having the stem beset with curved prickles; North America and Europe and Asia
cleavers
, genius and businessmen. Nowadays, there are many factories which are making lots of fake advertisements on
TV
to multiply the number of their unreal products. So, after that while children watching
TV
, they seen famous person who is using low-quality products that they advertised for big money. After all children will be fussy and demand their parents to buy these fake products to be alike famous people that they saw on
TV
or journal. I strongly disagree with
this
side of the
problem
. In conclusion, according to the goodness of
this
I think it depends on people who is copying famous celebrities and person who is being copied with his or her popular quality.
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