Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Technology
is part of life for every work and every
people
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person
, nowadays. As the development of modern
technology
, the lifestyle of
peoples
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the peoples
are changed
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is changed
and every kind of workplaces
are
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is
easy to make a process done by applying modern
technology
. Some peoples think modern
technology
makes people more
sociable even
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sociable, even
though some think it is making them less sociable. In
this
essay, I will explain my own opinion and both
side
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sides
of view. On the
one
hand, there is no doubt that modern
technology
can change our huge environment into a small
one
. Because of social media applications like Facebook, Twitter, Instagram makes
peoples
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people
contact easily from
one
place to another with the use of the internet on our mobile phone and laptop. We can make a chat with each other by making face to face calls and voice calls either for living sociably. That makes people don't need to spend extra money for
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
to meet each other in the real world.
For example
, without the use of
technology
people may have to travel
one
country to another by using the transportation system if they are living in distant places. So, it is
obvious
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obviously
about
technology
is making people more sociable.
On the other hand
, some peoples are very attached to the
technology
that makes them feel like don't want to meet people in-person. Children
also
become very obsessed with modern
technology
that reduces spending time with their friends and family.
For example
,
peoples
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people
who are very sociable on the internet cannot able to make a perfect conversation in reality as they can chat
on
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with
social media. Peoples
also
make online shopping and buying other stuff online which make the limitation of actual interaction among peoples. To conclude, in my opinion, modern
technology
gives the equivalent of pros and cons to everyone who can use it effectively
for
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in
their life with the usage of limitations.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • online marketplaces
  • mobile payment options
  • personalized advertising
  • accessibility
  • compare prices
  • decision fatigue
  • impulse buying
  • financial imprudence
  • privacy and data security
  • transformed
  • streamlined
  • user-friendly
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