With the improvement in today's health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in number of elderly people today and how can it be managed? give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your knowledge or experience.

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In
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current environment of corona virus it is very important to improve todays
health
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care
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system especially for elderly people. It is very important to take
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of elders, if you successfully do that I am sure
health
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care
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will
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be able to take
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of every
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group that includes children and adults. As new
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has came the
health
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care
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system has climbed a new level of treating people. Hospitals have become a place of
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for everyone. With new generation and brilliant doctors the chances of
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for every
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to cure them self has increased a
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. Nowadays hospitals have become as important as temples. The
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people believe in god in the same
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they believe in doctors. We have so much
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become we have seen some of the worst cases or situation happened to people in the current era, because of all the new disease and virus we have got a chance to investigate and that's why we have developed a
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. We have a
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of reasons to research nowadays. As the
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increases the
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problems
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increases and so we have to find the cure and treat old people to make sure
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does not happen to adults with children. Elder people are very important in Indian culture. A family is definitely a perfect family if they have at least one elder
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. Taking
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of elder
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is the
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priority. Its not only because of love and affection, but if we are not more able to take
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of them than in the future no one will take
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of us because some day we
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have to get old. The
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we give
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to a child that you still have a life ahead in the same
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we should motivate elder people till their
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breath. And that's
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way
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it is very important to not only take
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of elderly people when they are sick but all the time. Society is the biggest problems for elderly people. Everyone is busy in their own life. A child has to be a man and a man has to earn a
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. In
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dream and fantasy they forget to serve and
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the elderly
person
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around them. Population is increasing and that means every
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group's population will increase. By looking at how busy the society is, it fell scared to think that society will not be able to cope up with the increase in the number of elderly people. But it can be managed. We can manage. Here WE are very important. Lets support elderly people. Let's give them
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. I am not saying to give your whole day in them that can never happen. Its just some time not just thinking about them, but helping them, sitting with them, talking with them happily and letting them feel they do exist in
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world. Sharing some jokes, information, new
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or anything but just making them feel part of
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world. We can together cope up with the increase in the number of elderly people. The
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we support the same
age
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group in the same
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support different
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groups. I would like to say to the society, stop thinking a crying for people of things
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temporary. Everyone has to go someday. Let’s not make them feel that day is today.
Hope
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is everything. We have
technology
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and great
health
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care
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because we have hoped to make everyone feel healthy and happy including elderly people.
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