With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

The maps illustrate some proposed changes to the layout of a
university’s
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university
sport centre. It is clear that the sports centre will be expanded in size. The leisure pool will be built
next
to the changing room. And
two
extra changing rooms will be constructed on both sides of the
bottom
corners.
Additionally
, the sports shop and the café will be added
next
to the changing rooms on the west
side
and east
side
respectively. It is the interesting point that
two
dance studios will be opened up on the east
side
of the centre.
Also
, the sports hall will be erected beside the seating.
Finally
, the gym will be enlarged in size. While, the 25m pool and seating and change room
next
to the 25m pool will remain unchanged. The maps illustrate some changes that have taken place in a public
park
since 1920. Overall, the fountain has been changed to the
rose
garden
and many seats have been constructed around the
rose
garden
. And the stage for musicians has been replaced with the amphitheatre for concerts to accept more people. Looking at the changes more detail, the
rose
garden
next
to the entrance
in
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on
Arnold Avenue has been diverted into the café and the pond for water plants in the top right-hand corner of a public
park
has been made
into
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in
the children’s play area.
Finally
, the glasshouse in the
bottom
has been changed to the water feature and the entrance underground
car
park
has been built in the
bottom
right-hand corner.
Also
, the
rose
garden
in
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at
the left
bottom
was demolished. While
two
entrances remain unchanged. The
two
maps illustrate some changes that were made in a City Hospital between the years 2007 and 2010. From the overall perspective, it is noticeable that there are three main changes to access
of
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to
hospital. These involved a new bus station, new roundabouts and new parking. Looking at the changes in more detail, in 2007 there was a bus stop on the east
side
of out of City Hospital.
However
, we see a new bus station located on the west
side
of Hospital Road.
Furthermore in
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Furthermore, in
2010 three roundabouts were constructed on both
side
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sides
of Hospital Road and near the public
car
park
. Indeed, a
car
park
for staff and public in 2007 was changed into a
car
park
for only staff.
However
, by 2010 the public
car
park
had built on the east
side
of Ring Road to provide parking space for members of the public.
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