Students today can access information online , so libraries are not necessary . To what extedn do you agree or disagree.

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Nowadays, online

reading is being more common and some people think that

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libraries are not being

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an integral part

of readers

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however believe

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however, believe

that even though technology has reduced our need to go to the libraries

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our traditional libraries can never become redundant

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As a result

of technology majority of students are not going to libraries who have own mobile phone or computer

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Because

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they prefer to read online and they gain information or books they want when they connected to the internet

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a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

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consequences

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this

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prevents

spending extra time

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For example

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he or she can read online a book from a

loong

primarily temporal sense; being or indicating a relatively great or greater than average duration or passage of time or a duration as specified

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distance without going to the libraries and even it

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make or cause to be or to become

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creates

created

some benefits

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as students do not spend extra money to get libraries if the library is far away.

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in my belief

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libraries are

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the best choice

to

cencentrate

make denser, stronger, or purer

concentrate

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it is quick and easy to understand when reading a book because libraries have a comfortable and peaceful environment

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it is very difficult to always read books from the computer monitor. Traditional books are not harmful to the

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eye, because

it does not emit light by itself

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Another point is that

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the

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the right to enter

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to

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being actually such in almost every respect

virtual

libraries can be affected by power cuts and network failures

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Moreover

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in a traditional library no one faces

such

problems

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To conclude

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it can be said that advancement should be welcome in every

field but

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field, but

the importance of the libraries

can not

can not

cannot

put aside

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